Deanie

Thank you for all the wonderful feedback

I will take in all the comments you have made! And thank you for that compliment, because Roald Dahl is actually my inspiration ^.^

Hi Blue! I'm back! The horse screamed—Christian picked up the nearest chunk of stone, the face, and whipped it at the hellhound as hard as he could (not very hard). ...

Honestly after the brilliant reviews you have here, I think there isn't anything I can add. If I was Juno, I wouldn't even had said that they would be okay ...

Ooh I guess I should focus a bit more on the basic human needs seeing as they do matter in this story. I will get to them, hopefully soon. Ayano ...

I am glad you like it ^^ This was one of the hardest chapters to write.

Hey Bella! Yes, I will review the other chapters but not this one. You've had so much great feedback, I wouldn't know what to say! I will just keep reading ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! ^.^

THANK YOU FOR THESE You've had such great ideas I can't even wait to start editing

Bills. Always trouble. I must sort it out with them actually. Maybe this is where I can mention the income situation as well...

As always, good points. I will make sure I mention the income soon in the third chapter!

Thanks so much for this Tams

Brilliant as always :) And Mr. Catcher sounds very English to me ^^

Ooh I qualify for this *starts double checking for Englishness*