Deanie

Thank you for the comment!

Thanks for the review toukyo! A small note to bear in mind is that not all poems need capitalisation - it can be a stylistic choice as well :)

Thanks for the review! I know what I am thinking of with the word shambles, but maybe that is not generally understood? It might be a slang-culture thing. I do ...

I think the first line is there to stay, because I feel like it is a part of the poem it wouldn't quite feel complete without. And I wouldn't like ...

Thanks so much for taking the time out of studying to review! I am glad you liked it, and the typo DD: Already corrected ;)

Oh man. I am never, ever going to stop loving the humor in your poetry. Keep writing

Oh no, I don't feel that at all! I always value a different opinion on my work. I'll be thinking it over :)

I capitalised everything referring to the 'me' of the poem because she was the one who was going to be carried through the whole way. The other character was weaker ...

Thanks! I was interested to know what someone who has read the book would think of it. So this response is really valued

Thanks Audy! I like the idea of that, so maybe I will make a part II where there is more narrative detail to it.

I am glad you could like it so much ^.^

Glad you like it, Steggy!

Thanks for all the reviews this review day! :)

Thanks for the comments! I need to work on that rhythm so the pointers definitely help. Thank you!