Deanie

Thanks for the review Aley! I will definitely work on it :)

This is about a twelve year old girl really - but I didn't want to set a disability or an age. I did ask a particular person for their thoughts ...

Thanks so much for the review! Plenty of things to think about here ;) And of course, my writing style did develop with the help of all your reviews before!

Oh no, that wasn't a mistake! The British people spell it as metres.

You are very much my favourite person today. Thanks for the review ^^

Be nice to yourself xD

Agh, no time tonight :/ I will get to them soon, sorry!

So many helpful points. Thank youuu again!

Thanks for the review Tams! I will try and put some more of the positives in here. And yes, Catfish and comments of my family and being online is what ...

Thank you :) I didn't realize how I contradicted myself so much in this chapter. And descriptions. I will get right onto that.

Thanks for all the reviews you have done for me today, especially as you won't be on here every day anymore! You have so many good points O.o I will ...

Oh noes, I called you fortis >< It was automatic...

Thanks so much for the review! I will work on all those nitpicks. Originally this was supposed to have changing points of view, but I think I might have spent ...

Thanks for the long and well thought out review! You will find out who Honey is in the next chapter. And I will take all your points into consideration when ...