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Hello again :) What a great chapter! I love this so much :D We get promised the explanation we've been waiting for a long time... and we get to see ...

Hey Willow! So is this the end to book one now? Do we have to wait until you're done writing and posting book two? Although I know you are writing ...

Time for me to read the end! I have been looking forwards to it, now that I finally have the time. I'm trying not to repeat what was mentioned, but ...

Hi there Shady, I saw the title and flew by to see what has been written. It's very good, with interesting dialogue and idea. I was left with a lot ...

Remember me? Yes, I came back. This was a very short chapter, it basically seemed like dialogue. I felt very lost in this, and barefootrunner has already managed to nail ...

Hey there arli! Here to read what you gave me again. :) This was an interesting first chapter. Let me start by saying how much I love the name April, ...

I loved this chapter! It was great! Although it did have scenes in it from the movie, you stilled added originality in it with the beginning, which was exactly what ...

Hello again Another good chapter when it comes to writing. Detailed, moving forwards and showing a lot of Dave's character. We returned to his point of view. It was a ...

Hey Darkraven, Just continuing the story here. It was a great chapter! I love how Mandy stood up for herself and spoke her own thoughts, although later on she did ...

Hey Omi! I read the Prologue before reading this, just so that I would know what it was about. The prologue is a tab bit annoying, because it is totally ...

Hello again :) Another amazing chapter with enough detail and everything for me to be absolutely hooked! Again, I will apologise for the shortness of my review because it's hard ...

Hello Anabel I find it really difficult to review really great works because you end up needing to scan with a close eye and see tiny mistakes. So excuse this ...

Hey there Deadman! I'm here to review your second chapter! I did read your first one, so I could know what was happening. I would've reviewed it too but you ...

Hey there Samantha! This was an interesting essay, although I think it would better fit into the category of other. I see it more as a review of the show, ...

Hey there Spirit! This looked like an interesting story, and I'm glad I stumbled upon it. Of course, I read the first few chapters before reviewing this one. It was ...