Deanie

:DDD Minerva and Christian are SO meant to be together! Look how sweet they are, giving gifts and promising he would read to her

Hey Lucrezia! Ooooh I'm so excited! How is she going to get out of this one? Her powers are coming! How is she going to be able to use them ...

Hello there :") Here to review the next chapter for you on review day! So, let me say I liked this one more than the other one. You put some ...

Heya Greenlight! When you said there was a novel you were writing, I hope you meant this one ;) Either way, it's the one I'm reading now! If I'm wrong, ...

Heya Timmy So I actually had time to review it now. Here goes! I don't think so much prose is annoying, especially as there was some dialogue towards the end ...

Hello! Let's pretend that this review is not weeks overdue, okay? :P Looking at the two reviews below me I can see most things I wanted to mention have been ...

Heya Messenger! So I just about have time to read this before I need to go to school. I think you did a really good job of showing the characters ...

Blue! Oh yay we get to see Minerva again soon! And see the Good Magic and maybe even a glimpse of the Other World through the portal, who knows. Well, ...

Dear Lucrezia, I'm sure it's just me but as this story progresses the chapters just keep getting better and better. I find it sort of funny that even though she's ...

Lucrezia, Wow. Just wowzee! That was an amazing and I mean BRILLIANT AMAZING chapter. I will now proceed to tell you what I loved about it: 1. The argument between ...

Heya Blue! You're writing sure is hard to review because you make it so perfect! You're great with choosing names, you don't know how much I love Minerva. Just the ...

Hey Shady! Took me a while to get here but I'm here now! I apologise for the delay... been a tad busy lately! So I reread the first chapter to ...

Hey sis! Whoa... I didn't know you wrote stuff like this! You're such a happy and bubbly person it's so surprising to see you writing something so dark and wowzee... ...

Hola Blue! This story is getting more and more interesting as it progresses. I feel like this park is a different world from the outside one, especially as they had ...

Hey Lucrezia! I'm back! I saw you've posted the final chapter and I'm not too far off it actually DD: I hope there is time for everything I want to ...