Deanie

Hey Rishabh! Thanks for writing more. I was beginning to miss reading my Operation Imperial as I usually do :) So it was good to see some more of it ...

Hey there, Hmm, I must admit I was a bit put off when I saw this because it was so long! Maybe you should split it in two or in ...

Heya! Here as promised! I've read through all the previous chapters, so nice I'm up to date with everything. I didn't write a review every time, so I might put ...

Hey Maryanne, I am now seriously confused. Is this chapter the bit that's missing out about her going on the plane to coming to the new house? Because if it ...

Hey Maryanne! This is good, although pretty short for it's own chapter. Maybe you should combine one and two to make it longer? I like the name Tully. It's unique ...

Hey Skins, I'm writing this as I read it, so I'm sorry if it sounds a bit like: you did this and this wrong. I get to the good bits ...

Hi Alora, The story just keeps getting better! I'm starting to see how you add in Malikay's story to this as well. It'll be interesting when Damo tells the story. ...

Hi Alora! So this was pretty long, but it was my pleasure to read it. I also read the prologue, because it helps to read it fully, I believe. I ...

Hello, hello :) I've read the story all the way up to here so I would be able to understand what was going on. And it was well worth my ...

Heya Willow, The stories here just keep getting better and better. It's interesting to see how although Eli and Sheri are arguing, they still have to work together and tolerate ...

Hey Shady, You don't sound to well, so do get better soon! I'm glad this chapter got itself sorted for you, so I have more to read as well :) ...

Hey Willow! Another good chapter, with a turn of events I wasn't expecting. Sheri and Eli falling out? I'm curious to know why that happened! I guess it's something I'll ...

Hey Willow, Back to read more, although I had quite the break in between! Let's get started then. This part was good interesting. We get to see Eli and Sheri ...

Hello, hello, hello Another chapter for a review. A much longer one. It must of been costly to post these all at once :o But this chapter was one of ...

Willow, I'm here again, Reading more of this just makes me feel happier. It's such a nice story, and I really do like mysteries. Well, let's see how this goes. ...