Deadman

I'll take this all into consideration next time, and this really makes sense. I'm not really god with poems, but this is something that came up in one of my ...

Thank you, when I find the time I will sit down and re-write most of this. I knew it need work but I find it rather difficult to spot errors ...

Thank you, I'll get to working those out more.

I felt as though this really called out to me. You managed to capture the bad days in a perfectly worded poem. The only error I can see ERZA pointed ...

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