Deadenedpulse

I really dug this piece. It seems dark, and personally I like that. The only thing that caught my eye is you used the number 8 instead of the word, ...

A very laid back feel of a poem. And I like that in it, very redeemable, but it seems to be lacking a certain luster, maybe more depth, or perhaps ...

I enjoyed the poem, but like the above comment, it seems more of a song. The flow was nice, and the wording. All in all a very enjoyable read.

Once again my friend, we find ourselves walking along our forgotten memories. but in the end (we were never the wiser) we always forgot to look behind us, the specter ...

Greetings, My name is James, and I currently reside in Florida. Not much else to say, but I write poetry, and short stories. And I find that poetry is a ...