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Re: crown of darkness chapter 0
Hiya malacrim! I am very intrigued by the idea of the main character being an outcast between mortals and immortals. I am however very picky about grammar and punctuation. First ...
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Re: Eyes Wide Shut 1.1 (Edited)
Hi Deanie! I love this story so much! I have read up to the most recent (11.1) and I can't stop reading it! Even at this beginning it is still ...
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Re: -Removed-
Hi Tigerlilly37! I really loved your story's idea and how it went together! I like how the beginning gave the reader background on Max's relationship with his mother. The only ...
Feb 11, 2015 -
Re: Another World: Chapter I
Hi, I'm new to this site and I am glad that your story is one of this first I have read! I like the path that this story is heading ...
Feb 11, 2015