DarthAJ

This was a very interesting prologue. MidnightWriter did a great job at finding those errors. What I liked: - The general theme of the hidden flame and the whole lore ...

I have a suggestion regarding this part: Abalon was once among one of the major capitals of the skyworld, in its heyday it was a bustling, colourful city filled with ...

This was simply brilliant. At first I thought it was a timeline of the events happening along with the action a character takes place at those times. That's until I ...

19/08/2009 - The results slipped from his chubby hands. Mud covered the three F’s on the paper. His mother slapped him with all his past certificates and awards. He looked ...

Thuake Brooks - Earth The last few hours had been so stressful. I hate to accept any weaknesses but seeing Jayk die like that was not easy and now we ...

No! Not the movie! It is very, very loosely based on the book. The plot is significantly different. It's still an enjoyable action flick. I adore Asimov. He was one ...

Wow shadow awesome post! Hope you come back soon! Sad to see a fellow Earth guy go :(

Thuake Brooks - Earth I was going up the steps to the rooftop when someone crashed into me. It was Arwen "Watch it kid," I roared at her. I tried ...

Thuake Brooks - Earth I was awake at 8AM. I needed seven and a half hours of sleep at night, any more and I felt too tired when I woke ...

Rey Hardstone - Luna It lit up my eyes to see three saviors come to life right in front of me. Even if I didn't turn out to be a ...

Storybooks are so much fun. You'll enjoy it! :) Yeah the other one is really fun too right now! To keep things interesting in the other storybook I'm doing my ...

Hello I'm DarthAJ :) I'm new to storybooks (doing another one too right now), so forgive me if I do any mistakes!

Rey Hardstone - Luna Dear Rey Hardstone, report to the Determination room A.S.A.P. The piece of paper fell from my hands. My face screamed out surprise and astonishment. The day ...

Jayk is open to friendship too. I uh... tried to add some interaction between my character and the others at the table in my little part. I would like it ...

@ReisePiecey It looks like our characters are gonna be great friends :)