Darren_Shan_Fan

This is a really good poem and I enjoyed it. Maybe if you expanded it more and gave more detail about this girl it would be even better. :D But ...

Thanks for all your comments. I've taken in what you've all said and I've created a story similar to this one but a lot longer. Hopefully I will post it ...

We both walked out of the cinema slowly and I was tryiing to remember that glorious moment as best I could. We both went to the same school, Connor and ...

I told you that I loved you And you said "I love you too But lets keep this to ourselves, A secret between me and you. I kept my promise ...

Wow Shelley that was amazing! I never knew you wrote poems and that was a really good poem. Sorry if that sounded a bit rude. Jess

These feelings inside me Are raging to be set free And your ignorence is despising Yet you dont notice a thing No you never notice a thing! My love for ...

Hey I know that eviefizz's and my poem are really similar but me and eviefizz go to the same school and we are in this same class so therefore we ...

thanks.. :D

Okay thanks guys and sorry if it anoyed you. I should have spent more time on it but im deffinetly goin to edit it and post the new one. :P ...

Yea good point :P Thanks for the comment you are right im not even sure if this is the beginning of the story or the ending its just an idea ...

Thanks for the comment. Sorry about the mistake I was in a rush But thanks for the tip :P

Okay this is english homework in by tomorrow morning so I need your thoughts on how to make it better asap!!! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- He's

A really interesting story the first cupple of sentences were a bit boring but it was deffintily worth the wait!!!

Good story, funny too. Desperate to know what happens next to Ava.

Wow this story is really good!!! You discribed everything really well so that the reader could emphasise what the character is feeling. Even though it wasnt that long those words ...