Darlet

Thanks! I'll change it now!

To anyone who read this, I made some changes to some words I used because I updated the design I had in mind for the monster. Just wanted to say ...

I'll probably rewrite the chapter later. See if I can get an opportunity to squeeze more stuff in.

I changed it a little bit now. (I also wanted to have it shake her to see if she'd wake up from it, but I didn't really know how to ...

Thanks! I already felt like it was too short, and I'll try to extend it as soon as possible! Her immediately waking up indeed isn't very realistic. Thanks for reminding ...

This is one of the funniest things I've ever read! I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, and it's overall an amazing work. Fun to read aloud too. Can't ...

Read it aloud, and it was fun!

I really liked your review! As for whether she cut off her head or her heartstrings, I left that very unclear on purpose, so people can imagine themselves what she ...

I didn't expect to read it that quickly either, haha! And it seems that I just got a female vibe from them then.

It's wonderful. The flow is good, I didn't notice any grammar or spelling errors, and the narrative style is very interesting. There didn't happen much in this chapter, but I ...

Cutting the last sentence was on purpose, as that is where the poem, and her life, ends.

Oh, and the last sentence not being completed was on purpose, in case anyone thinks it's a mistake.

Thanks. Your review is beautiful.. I have no words for it. And I was indeed trying to show the power of writers. In a way, even a figure as cruel ...