DarknecrosisX

Yeah, reading the below comment that conclusion you have drawn is clearly not the case. Whatever format I used (either distorted by changes in the site or faulted in my ...

Sorry Guys, the site's not letting me paragraph it or get rid of those irritating '???'. Sorry for this, but I'm going to have to delete and repost.

I can't tell if that's sarcasm, based on your name, but I will take it as appraisal.

Thanks Sam! By the way, the fighting comes in at chapter 7. Gore in chapter 10.

But Umbrim is a Necromancer though, you'll get to know more about Vivamus in chapter 6. Just so you know Wyverus Necrosis and Vivamus Tonitrui were going to be characters ...

Firstly Mad Dog, no swearing, especially not on my novel, so edit your post or I will... yeah, you get the picture. Secondly, the letter was reporting Umbrim to the ...

No, what he said was: Regardless, this was definately not my last stop, no doubt this new detective was right on my trail. I wasn't planning to stay long in ...

Leahweird, he is on the run because he murdered 63 people, that's not leagal, not in the Immortal world.

Thanks for the feed back Sam. Not added: sam likes lips that resemble lamb chops... Oh yeah, Sam your eyesight is going, I treble checked all 'Amica's' have capital letters, ...

Leahweird, Thankyou very much :), and yes I did change point of view to Amica. When I do a double paraphrase that means I've changed pov. Just in case you ...

Davidchloe, the names are latin translations of words that describe the characters, if that helps in any way.

P.s I am now immasculated

P.s i used the TAB button to put spaces between the speakers, but it didn't seem to detect them when i posted it :L.

Very deep in meaning for such a short poem. I am obsessed with poems like this, keep up the good work!