Darkmoon158

Hey my peeps! I've posted my chapter 2 if you haven't noticed! Don't mean to sound rude I just want some people to read it! :D If you would please, ...

I have 36 days left BUT we had a VERY short winter break and spring break. So yeah living in Florida kind of sucks right now. :shock: No really it ...

Before I start the story I just want to say, that the way I rate my stuff may be different then the way you rate your stuff so please don't ...

Let me just say one thing, I know about the dialogue ok! I know you guys are just helping but if you read that someone has already said that to ...

I have three days left on my spring break. God I hate the hurricanes we had, it messed up every break we have. Now I get out, of the grade ...

I don't mean to sound rude or anything but um....I think that you said him just a little too much. I understand that you were trying to be mysterious but ...

Grim Reaper, Grim Reaper If I touch your sheath will I bleed? Grim Reaper, Grim Reaper If I see your face will you have to do your dirty deed? Grim ...

Thanks. Yeah most people don't notice how old I am but it doesn't really matter to me what age a writer is just if they can write or not. :shock: ...

Hang up. What would you do if you pretended to be like superman and found out in mid-jump that you can't fly?

I was hoping you guys would like it. I have really low self esteem just so you know. Thanks for the tip on dialogue. And I wasn't talking about you ...

Ok this is my story Purple Rain just revised. So hope the people that replied before enjoy it this time. Rain Before Dawn Chapter 1 Upon the ground freshly fallen ...

Well it's just that she's going to Blockbuster and I doubt that would be interesting in anyway.

Oh and one last thing I ummm....don't know how to do that thing with conversations. That question is for you Eloere. A little I need help on that thing.

I don't know how to be more specfic. But I could give you some background info so you could help me. :( I need it I can't finish my chapter ...

Please help me. I need to know how to write a person going from one place to another. Let me explain. This one person in my story hops into a ...