DarkerSarah

Most everything I've posted on here has been "raw." I use the suggestions I get to make my writing better. I'm generally not all that serious about turning the stories ...

Sorry about that! It's definitely not you...I set up those links before the site was revamped over a year ago. I probably need to redo them, but in the mean ...

I actually agree with you, Snoink. This is just the very first few paragraphs of a story that's been revolving in my head for years, coming out in different ways. ...

Thanks, Snoink! I really missed writing for you guys, and reading equally as much. Those are very personal questions, but also very valid. I didn't make it clear that it ...

Yes, yes, of course! I definitely planned to as the story progressed. This was more of a summary than anything...I'd been writing on it for quite a while but I ...

Thanks so much for correcting that first sentence. I knew it was wrong, but I've read this so many times I couldn't fix it. And I don't mind that you ...

Thanks, and I totally agree with you on my characterization of the other characters. I'm very comfortable with Damon, because I've written in his perspective before, but both Alyssa and ...

Thanks Jack. I went back and fixed those things. I've wanted to change them, but I wasn't exactly sure how. I appreciate this tremendously.

To be sure, I was trying to imitate your style in "Remember Lanie." Ah...biggest compliment of my life. "Remember Lanie" is my baby . Anything good said about it makes ...

I'm not a poet critic, but beautiful imagery!

I appreciate that so much. I actually WAS wondering why I haven't gotten any comments on it. I figured it was too long. :lol: You know, I did think about ...

Yes, Snoink...I think that's a good thing. It's actually a very interesting way of looking at it because I didn't even look at it like that, but it describes it ...

Well, that "cold" atmosphere is really what I was aiming for. I can't rewrite the whole thing because you didn't "feel anything," because that would ruin the it. I'll definitely ...

Thanks, guys. I'm working on a revised version of the second part, right now. I think I'm a little more comfortable inside the girl's head now that I'm finding out ...

Find Part Three: Clarity, here