Darkehthewriter

Good start, especially with introducing how the character's family relationship is, but there are a few things you could fix. -You came on just a bit too strong and a ...

Well, first off I would like to say this is a great start for a story and that the actions in the story were greatly described but there are a ...

I decided that I will do reviews so that I can start posting my writings. Below you will find what I will review and what I won't review. I will ...

Oh dear, I truly need to start learning to check forum replies more often. I shall answer the questions now I guess. Novels-I have not yet written a novel yet ...

Sort of new here but defiantly not new to writing, as I have been writing for about 5-6 years now. I'm use to writing in first person but I'm starting ...