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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 2

    Wow. This is so good! :D I didn't want it to end. Just being picky, I seriously hope the thinks I’m just clumsy. Is the 'the' meant to be they? ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 1

    I really enjoyed reading this! :) With the speech though, you don't always have to use adverbs. Like I explain calmly Most of the time just the 'I explain' is ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Disenchanted

    This is great. :) I really like the detail of the description, but sometimes there is a bit too much. Maybe only describe in detail some of it, rather then ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey everyone :)

    Oh, just want to ask what are the points for? :) x

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey everyone :)

    heyya :) thanks everyone, I'm pretty much finding my way around the site, but I will ask if I have any questions. I'm not really sure what type of writing ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey everyone :)

    Well, I'm new here, so just trying to be friendly :D What can i say? I love reading and have found a new love for writing. I don't know if ...

    Nov 3, 2011


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