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Re: Redemption [Chapter 1]
UPDATED TO VERSION 1.1 Suggestions from the above were all taken into consideration while revising this piece. The only one that I completely ignored was the suggestion to make it ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Death Code
I appreciate your comment, but is there a way to improve this story? Specifically concerning plot, because I'm considering writing a practice novel with a little of this idea.
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Checkmate
Thank you for the reply! I believe I have fixed these problems, so I updated the original post with a new version of the story. Any additional comments would be ...
Mar 27, 2011