DarkRain

This was a nice idea for a story. It was implemented well, and entertained the reader. That said, here are the nitpicks: I’ll tell you what happened. No, you say ...

UPDATED TO VERSION 1.1 Suggestions from the above were all taken into consideration while revising this piece. The only one that I completely ignored was the suggestion to make it ...

Okay, this is my first novel. I'm just wanting to go through the process of writing one. And FYI, this is as much of a romantic novel as it is ...

Simply put, has anyone here taken the AP English exam? Is it easy? Can it be taken without taking the class, just going through a prep book? Would that be ...

I appreciate your comment, but is there a way to improve this story? Specifically concerning plot, because I'm considering writing a practice novel with a little of this idea.

Walking forward, one foot slowly at a time, my shoes sank into the mud. Cars were zooming past me on my left as I looked up to the sky, rain ...

Removed, but thanks for all of the advice!

I enjoy writing flash fiction (a fictional piece under 1,000 words). Does this site allow me to post it somewhere?

Thank you for the reply! I believe I have fixed these problems, so I updated the original post with a new version of the story. Any additional comments would be ...

GRAMMAR AND SPECIFICS shouting "Oh NO!" yet at the same time shouting "Oh YES!" because "NO" and "YES" should not be capitalized, this is odd formatting and doesn't look professional. ...

GRAMMAR AND SPECIFICS I Breathed in shallow quick breaths "Breathed" should be "breathed" I could already see the next weeks headlines "weeks" should have an apostrophe between the 'k' and ...

Checkmate: A powerful word to any chess player. Many know that this word means the end of a chess match, because a victor has been decided. However, few know how ...