Danny17

Okay first of all I loved most of the poem... it emits a silent anger something that makes you think again about yourself and what have you been doing... everything ...

Ok first of all I loved the start and I can see the bond between them its beautiful, but the problem is you didn't write much, that is the flaw ...

I must say that this romantic novel is one I could be reading and read it all over again. A really big thumbs up, loved how it started and i'm ...

The story starts really nicely, i like how he loses all emotion and can feel other peoples emotions still it needs more description of the character and i cant help ...

Today i'll be heading to Abigail's house and I gotta say I am pretty nervous about going to her house just before New Years Eve. What if her parents decide ...

Its quite a really neat story I loved the real life situation. But its true you should put why here mom is that way and why her father left. The ...

Thanks :D

The story starts neatly and has a good sound to it but you need to write more or put more info on the character i didn't know who Dave was ...

It was a normal day in my not so normal life. Evening was close now, the breeze was picking up and it was getting colder. I remember it was October. ...

This story is the kind ive never read about and its good in many ways. Great work :D

Im new to this site and this is the first chapter ive read out of anything here, I must say the details you wrote make the reader sink into the ...

IM really new to writing but i plan to get better at it. Im a 17 year old rookie but i hope to have a nice time here. :D