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Re: Chapter 2 part 2
Nice job. Your a very good writer. I really have nothing much to say then good job. Grammar was good, well done. - Danielm1233
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Re: TITLE COMING SOON - Chapter 1 Part 2!
Nice job. At first i didn't quite understand what was going on. But then i got to the middle of the story and i felt it. I felt the emotion ...
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Re: the dark
Nice job. When i was reading your piece i felt like i was in this story. I could feel the emotion that you delievred. Your a very good writer. The ...
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Re: Sophie and Ray
Really nice poem. I like how in this type of poerty you brought the audience into it. I also like the word usage. Good Job. - Danielm1233
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Re: The Great Test of Faith -- Chapter One
You did a really nice job on your story. I can't wait until you make another chapter. Good Job. - Danielm1233
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Re: The Life and times of Secert Treasure
I agree with you Daughther of Evil. Thank you so much for reading my piece. I'll do exaclty what you said so that it can be much better.
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Re: A Testimony By Faith
I really like how you were brave enough to display your faith. I'm also Chrisitan and i felt touched about your testimony. Really good job. You know these are the ...
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Re: The Life and times of Secert Treasure
The Life and times of Secret Treasure You know I don’t really know what to write for an introduction so I’m going to wing it. Okay so sorry for this ...
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