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Thanks Kitkat. I did check wikipedia before I posted but I wanted to see if anyone knew any good sites. That's awesome Fishr. If you could ask your mom that ...

Thanks Kitkat. I did check wikipedia before I posted but I wanted to see if anyone knew any good sites. That's awesome Fishr. If you could ask your mom that ...

Um I'm not good with time periods. About the time that the english sail over.

I'm working on a new novel where that the main character is Cherokee. So it would be very helpful if someone knew where I can find something on the language, ...

Done with half of the rewriting of this critique. Does he at least look hot? I'm a little biased about him being hot because I based his description off my ...

Hehe thanks Snoink. I'm making the changes and once I get them all done I'll repost it. It's a bit hard to read all of the critiqe because of little ...

I'm glad I don't go to that school. Personally I don't see what the problem is as long as their parents approve of what their wearing I don't see what's ...

Hello. I just wanted to say what you've got so far is a great start and I'm sorry I can't give you any ideas of what to write next. I ...

I know what you mean. 9/11 is something I don't think I ever will forget. I was only ten then so I remember turning on the tv and I cried ...

Thanks. I'm making the changes even if it's a little slowly. Thanks for the thorough critique it helped me spot some of the small mistakes I made. Like Cooly and ...

I usually write late at night when no one's up. I write on loose leaf paper and stick it in a binder. Sometimes I can write during the day but ...

Thanks. I'm going to make the changes. I'm not the best with grammar and when I read ‘The hooded figure moved swiftly with a bag swinging at their side' so ...

I liked it. I'm not good at critiqueing but as far as I can tell I don't see any grammatical errors in it. :)

Alright. I'm posting my first story on here. It's untitled right now so any title suggestions would be great. So what does everyone think? **Sidhe is almost like an elf ...

I agree with Inertia. This story's good and it has alot of potential. I would make the changes that Inertia suggested but that's just my opinion. If you have more ...