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  • Poetry » Other, Other
    Re: Madness

    Hello! Sorry if I'm not that useful, it's been a while since I've been on this website. I quite like this poem, to be honest. It's short and doesn't seem ...

    Mar 12, 2019

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Alone

    Hey, DamienCyfer here writing a short review. Personally, I love this poem. It is relatively short and sweet, and is oddly easy to read. The lines and ideas flow into ...

    Feb 12, 2018

  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture
    Re: Who am I?

    This is DamienCyfer here for a review! Wow... this is actually really good! The poetry flows well, and the slight brakes in structure are hard to notice in the strength ...

    Mar 19, 2017

  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic
    Re: The Blub Monster

    Wow! DamienCyfer here for a review! So... this short little story does an excellent job of capturing the fear children feel when they hear things not meant to be there, ...

    Aug 3, 2016

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Grounded

    Wow! Still not experienced in the delicate art of reviewing, but just by reading this lightly I believe you have captured the complex emotions, reasons, and gradualness of a human ...

    Aug 1, 2016

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: Old

    Hey! This is Damien, writing a quick review. Im still new to this so sorry if its not that good. Well... This short story is excellent! You manage to pack ...

    Feb 1, 2016

  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative
    Re: perspective

    Hey Bridgetavc, this is awesome!!!! I love how you have given such a strong image in my mind, and that you have kept mystery through out the whole piece. People ...

    Nov 30, 2015

  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: The Deluge

    Hey DamienCyfer here for a short-ish review:) One note, sorry if I am a bit of my best, there is just a lightning storm outside my window! Good time to ...

    Nov 3, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: prologue

    Hi, DamienCyfer here doing a little review. I love how the story shows the characters emotions really well, and gives a bit of info to the characters, but not to ...

    Nov 3, 2015

  • Other » Humor, Realistic
    Re: Front Page Material

    Just a short review. The dialogue is fluent, and well accented whilst not overdoing it. In fact, I just read a good mystery book, and they solved it just like ...

    Nov 3, 2015

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