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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural
    Re: The Fading - Chapter One

    Hey there Roundsquare! How are you doing this fine day? As I told you I would be earlier, I'm here to review this work of yours. I thank you again ...

    Dec 29, 2013


  • I love the complete and utter randomness of the poem, reminds me of my inner self at times. Great title, great poem, good job! Being as this poem is supposed ...

    Jul 15, 2013

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: A Week For the World: Day 1: Part 2

    Hey Wildwildcat, Once again you've done a good job with plot and description. And just like with the first part you did a good job drawing the readers in at ...

    Jul 14, 2013

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: A Week For the World: Day 1 :Part 1

    Hello there, Wildwildcat. Although I don't read this kind of story too often, I really enjoyed this first part of A Week For the World. The title is a great ...

    Jul 14, 2013

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy
    Re: The Unknown Planet Chapter 2: Angrom

    Hello Jordin. I'm a little busy at the moment so this review might not be too long. A few comments: Once again you forgot to add puntuation. You also had ...

    May 9, 2013

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Unknown Planet: Chapter 1.

    Hello Jordin. That cold day I came home later than I normally did . I walked slowly up the front porch stairs and knocked on the door “hello” I said ...

    May 9, 2013

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Then Unknown Planet: Prologue.

    Hello Jordin, I'm here with a review. This story definitely has potential. I like what you have so far, but I think you could still improve it. Right now you ...

    May 9, 2013

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: Breach- Chapter 1 (Pt. 1)

    Hello there. I really liked this story so far and thought you did a good job on it. As others have mentioned, I believe there are a few grammatical errors, ...

    May 8, 2013

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture
    Re: Slayed

    Hello, Cspr. I thought this was interesting. It's definitely not my normal style, but I thought you did a good job. I like the words you used and can picture ...

    May 8, 2013

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: Whispers in the Dark

    Hello, I'm here with a review for you. Altogether I thought it was really good and you described it well. I am not familiar with the Warhammer 40,000 universe, but ...

    May 8, 2013

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: Glyph: An Impasse / Prologue

    Hello, I saw the link on your wall and decided to read this. I thought it was a really good prologue. I love the whole idea and I'm curious as ...

    May 7, 2013


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