DakotaK

Thanks for posting Silvercloud, I hadn't even read Bluestar's Prophecy before writing this. (I've already changed like 10 names in the story.) Anyways, it was Moonflower in Bluestar's Prophecy, not ...

Ok People, This piece has been entered in a contest that ends tomorrow (I think) and still it has a lonely review of 0. I know it's kind of long ...

Thanks for posting everyone:) Abigail, the "once upon a time" prefix is there because of the contest I entered it into; The Once Upon A Time Contest:) ~Dakota

Heh. Heh. * I'm laughing dryly at my stupidness* Vampires were "created" way back in history when people got sick with leprosy. They couldn't go out into the light because ...

*REVISED* 7/14/09

I've uploaded an updated version. ~Dakota

Thanks Antigone, for the review:) Umm... I've never watched Lord of the Rings before, sorry. I forgot to mention as well, Gabriel works in the stables. I gave the commoner's ...

Thank you both for your reviews. Constructive criticism is one of the main reasons I wanted to join the group. I don't want to be told, oh you're story's good, ...

I liked the poem a lot! It's very creative but I'd suggest a little more of an outline and more depth:) ~Dakota