DakotaK

Thank you for all of the reviews, I'm glad you were able to enjoy the chapter:) To clear up a little bit of misunderstanding on changing view point: There are ...

Thank you so much for the reviews, you helped me a lot Stella. I went back and brushed things up a bit:)

Thanks for the reviews everyone! To Ranger: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Just to clear up a few things for you: Zavier has been oppressed by his father since he ...

Thank you everyone for your helpful reviews, you probably don't realize how much it means that you take the time to read my work and help me improve it. I ...

Thanks for the reviews! I went ahead and added a little more to the story to try to clear up some questions:) Shane isn't her boyfriend or her friend at ...

Thank you everyone for reviewing: To Caligraphy: thanks for the in-depth review, just a few things: One thing that would have been nice though if you posted a quick summary ...

Ok, I revised it a bit. I have about 100 words left lol, so if you think I should take parts out or elaborate on other parts that would be ...

Thank you so much for the review Kyllorac! I went ahead and revised a few things and I'll probably go back through with a finer toothed comb when I have ...

Thank you so much for the review Heather, I went ahead and revised where you suggested though I still need to go back and brush up on characters when I ...

Thanks FW for the suggestions, I went ahead and did a little revising. I'm glad you liked the fairies, I'm never sure if I get too carried away, lol. ~Dakota ...

Hiya! Kyllorac- thanks for the awesome review. I can't ever judge something I've written myself so I love getting perspective, especially when in retrospect; it makes sense. There's so much ...

Hey FW, I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. I've put an embarrassing amount of time into it and I never know what people will think. The main reason I'm ...

Thank you for the reviews:) They're quite helpful and encouraging. ~DakotaK

Thanks:) I love suggestions! Improvment is one of the goals of posting here! ~DakotaK

Thank you everyone! *Excited applause* Yeah reviews :lol: Note: Thanks Tayla for asking around as well *warm hug* I'm very grateful to everyone who took the time to answer my ...