DakotaK

Hiya! Here for a review! Just a few nit-o-picks almighty leader Umm... I would change almighty, sounds a bit stuffy... have took over the whole Took should be taken They ...

Hi E.P.! So I went ahead and read your poem. Though I love writing poetry, I have to warn you I'm not very "learned" in the way of poems so ...

Hiya! I was trying to find someone to review the partial novel I have posted and in the past I have always enjoyed your in-depth reviews, that's what I need, ...

Hey Apple, After reading your comment; no review:) I just wanted to say that I enjoyed reading your 'documentary' lol! Wow, it seems like High school, no matter where you ...

Hey FW, I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. I've put an embarrassing amount of time into it and I never know what people will think. The main reason I'm ...

As I approached the counter the man eyed me suspiciously, probably wondering if I would dirty a bath up beyond repair. I had never been to a hot spring before ...

The sun sank further and further down in the Eastern sky. As it lowered itself away from visibility, the airs temperature dropped cruelly, causing me to shiver. It had rained ...

Hi there! Just a few simple nitpicks: my father never showed his emotions You state the above, but then throughout the entire chapter there is never not a time when ...

Hello, I enjoyed reading your story, it was really a different writing style than I'm used to, which was an unexpected surprise (in a good way). I love reading stories ...

Ominous! I liked it, heh heh. I mean I wasn't sure what exactly was falling and then when she woke up, I'm like oh, it's a human who was an ...

Hey there! Like SassyKat said, encase should be in case. I don't know if you left it that way for effect, but after a period, the next letter should be ...

I am running; barefoot, through a tall treed, dark and forbidding forest. The trees are branchless and seem to be dead spears plunging into the dark, starless sky. It is ...

“Zavier!” Zora hollered from the doorway. “The water’s on, and the fuel’s low, hurry !” I threw down the stack of wood in frustration, prepared to scream a retort but ...

I was a handsome little thing, or so my father reluctantly told me once. I had been born with a thick mop of ebony black hair, green eyes, and I ...

Thank you for the reviews:) They're quite helpful and encouraging. ~DakotaK