DakotaK

Hi ~FW~ Since you've been hard at work reviewing my novel I thought I'd take a look at the sort of things you like to write. Bravo *claps excitedly* the ...

Hi ya! So Theodcyning got pretty much all the nit-picks. I really enjoyed reading your piece. It was sad but touching nevertheless. I thought it was funny, but in one ...

Hi Payne, So I will be reviewing your piece today *bows*. I'm definitely not the best critiquer but let's start off with a few nitpicks I spotted while reading, 'kay? ...

Hi Lisa, LOL, I really enjoyed your piece, especially how the "ugly stepmother" just interrupted the monotone narrator, it was great. I'll admit the dialogue was a little rough, I ...

Thanks FW for the suggestions, I went ahead and did a little revising. I'm glad you liked the fairies, I'm never sure if I get too carried away, lol. ~Dakota ...

I guess Victor was too cold and miserable to carry much of a grudge since he refused to mention the embarrassing incident that had happened after that night. Still, we ...

Dreamwalker, Yes your piece has been commented on and adored by many and yet I hate reading anything without leaving a breadcrumb behind in my trail of endless wandering through ...

Hiya Shadowlight, Wow, that was impressive. I always picture things like a movie in my head when I'm reading them and if I can't do that to a piece well ...

I hadn’t been haunted by this dream since I had left home. I was standing again in the forest of branchless trees, shadowed by a sky that remained lifeless and ...

We were back on the road and my legs were aching. I’d decided not to mention the dream to Victor for some unknown reason and chose to forget the whole ...

The sky was bright, littered with stars, though the trees bushy heads obscured most of them. Victor’s snores carried on the soft wind, loud and blaring like an old mans. ...

I meandered slowly through town, Victor following me closely as if he was about to lose me. He reminded me of a small beggar child, following behind a rich man ...

Hiya! Kyllorac- thanks for the awesome review. I can't ever judge something I've written myself so I love getting perspective, especially when in retrospect; it makes sense. There's so much ...

Hiya! Look's like your post got enough nit-picks but I just had to let you know I really enjoyed your piece. A friend of mine had me watch Monty Python's ...

Hi Freewritersavvy, Like Snoink mentioned it was a bit more "technical" than most poetry, but I still loved it, very refreshing! Poetry is an awesome way to put words to ...