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I clutched tightly to the mail armor as I stared at the red haired girl in the mirror, her swollen abdomen all too obvious beneath the filthy tunic. How I ...

“Victor?” I’d woken from a sharp kick in my back. I turned over to find the wizard thrashing madly in his covers clutching his throat. His body was shaking all ...

“Zavier?” I rolled over to face Victor. His face was covered in soot and he looked exhausted. “Hmm?” I replied, listening to the rain softly patter on the canvas above ...

Hi Cammie, So I'm just going to start off with a few nit-picks, 'kay? Trixie’s mother’s sweet sing-songy voice echoed in the room. I froze and quickly pushed the lid ...

Hi ya... um either my computer is being unresponsive (highly possible) or the photo/image didn't load. I'm not seeing it in your post, sorry. ~Dakota Knight Oh cool, you got ...

It was dark by the time I stumbled through the high brass gates of Wayd. I hadn’t the slightest idea where Victor might be so I paid for a nights ...

Pain. So strong I know I am dying. It fills my entire body as my heart pulses painfully inside my chest. Quick hands press something cooling to my side and ...

Victor shook me and I cracked an eye open slowly. “What?” I yawned and sat up, stretching my arms out in the process. “Zavier, its Market Day today! We came ...

Wind rushed by me as I fell. Into what or where I was going I had no clue. Suddenly and unexpectedly, I was back in the royal carriage again and ...

Hi Dreamwalker, I have really enjoyed reading your work and I'm looking for a good reviewer to hunt through my novel and tear it apart. I'm desperate to either make ...

Thank you so much for the review Kyllorac! I went ahead and revised a few things and I'll probably go back through with a finer toothed comb when I have ...

Thank you so much for the review Heather, I went ahead and revised where you suggested though I still need to go back and brush up on characters when I ...

Hi Kitty, I don't know if you do novel's at all... is there a place people post saying they want to review novels? lol. Anyways, if you're interested in doing ...

Hi! So I didn't get a whole lot from the story and the ending was really confusing, why did he decide to die? And I didn't get to know the ...

Wow, you are a very talented artist, it is very beautiful. I'm jealous of anyone who can put their thoughts not only into words on a piece of paper, but ...