DakotaK

Thanks for the reviews! I went ahead and added a little more to the story to try to clear up some questions:) Shane isn't her boyfriend or her friend at ...

Prologue Shane shoved his way into the group of whispering young men, eager to take part in their scandalous adventure. They were hidden by several large ravenberry bushes that grew ...

Thank you everyone for reviewing: To Caligraphy: thanks for the in-depth review, just a few things: One thing that would have been nice though if you posted a quick summary ...

Whoa! What program did you use to make the cover? I think it's awesome, though I have to admit I don't know the first thing when it comes to designing ...

Ok Lady RaRa, so I'm here to follow up on reading the prologue. "BRYLEIGH NICOLE! ARE YOU AWAKE YET?" Again, should it be all caps? I woke with a start ...

Hi Lady RaRa, So your prologue was pretty decent, it didn't give me too much of anything, other than the fact the the story is about a girl who get's ...

Hi ya there Katrina!!! I never saw it change, But there's something different than before. There has to be a better way, This yawning gap we can't ignore. [ Yawning ...

Hi ya there Katrina!!! I smile, this false smile, A mask of lies, Under which I hide. A nice introduction, though very touching and sad:( Will anyone ever know, The ...

Hello Katrina! So I am still an avid fan of your poetry! We are all pieces of a shattered dream, Each desperately seeking our reality. Wow, this is a really ...

Hi MVB627! So, I liked it, but the formatting was kind of a mess, lol. I took a piece of your piece and took out the parenthesis and made it ...

Hi ya Katrina, So I really love your poetry and I am definitely an avid follower. One small issue I have with this poem is the comas. They seem to ...

“Victor?”I groaned as I slowly woke and found myself sitting on a hard wooden chair, my top half lying on the kitchen table. I sat up quickly and saw Zoey ...

The wind rustled through the tree tops, scattering the few loose leaves left on the naked trees through the chilly and damp morning air. Fog moved eerily around us and ...

It was midday and Valsephony was lying heavily on my back. I rolled over and realized Victor had woken me. He looked much better and was standing alongside me, shaking ...

The Kingdom ZaShwan was a small kingdom, ruled by a wise young prince, Shamus, whom the people loved. And though ZaShwan was at peace from war and the people there ...