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Re: Lin's Reviews
Hi Linx, I was hoping you would have a chance to review the story I wrote for Rosie Unicorn's contest. Title: Wyndolyn Rating: PG Genre:Fantasy Fiction Link: I hope it's ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Alainna's happy to help...
Hi Alainna, I was hoping you would have a chance to review the story I wrote for Rosie Unicorn's contest. Title: Wyndolyn Rating: PG Genre:Fantasy Fiction Link: I hope it's ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: "For what are we if not defined by words?" || CLOSED!
Hi Hannah, I was hoping you would have a chance to review the story I wrote for Rosie Unicorn's contest. Title: Wyndolyn Rating: PG Genre:Fantasy Fiction Link: I hope it's ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Wyndolyn
*REVISED* 7/14/09
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Anybody want a Critique?
Hi Chocoholic:) I was wondering if you'd care to take a peek at my story Wyndolyn. It's been reviewed/revised once but no ones reviewing my new piece :cry: I want ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Get your very own Dreamwalker review ;)
Hi! I was wondering if you would be willing to review my entry for Rosie Unicorn's contest. It's PG & Fantasy Fiction. ~Dakota
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Oh no. Oh no oh no oh no.
Hi! I was wondering if you would be willing to review my entry for Rosie Unicorn's contest. It's PG & Fantasy Fiction. ~Dakota P.S. I don't mind harsh criticism, it ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
Hey Antigone, I know by now you're probably sick of reading my story:) I was wondering if you could review it for me one last time and let me know ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Wyndolyn
I've uploaded an updated version. ~Dakota
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Wyndolyn
Wyndolyn could feel the blood trickling down her back as her legs pounded out a furious tattoo beneath her on the hard forest floor. She blinked, clearing her vision as ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Wyndolyn
Thanks Antigone, for the review:) Umm... I've never watched Lord of the Rings before, sorry. I forgot to mention as well, Gabriel works in the stables. I gave the commoner's ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Wyndolyn
Thank you both for your reviews. Constructive criticism is one of the main reasons I wanted to join the group. I don't want to be told, oh you're story's good, ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Cinder:Prologue (In other words, My life in a nut shell)
Prologue (In other words, My life in a nut shell) Once upon a time, long ago in a far away land lived a princess. Yeah right, shut up. I mean ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!
Hey Evi! I was hoping you could check out my "Which Path to Take?" contest entry. It's Fantasy Fiction (I'm not sure if you read Fantasy, if not you can ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
Hey Antigone! I was hoping you could check out my "Which Path to Take?" contest entry. It's Fantasy Fiction, PG and called Wyndolyn. It's about a elven girl running away ...
Jul 12, 2009
