DakotaK

Hey Merlin, I really enjoyed reading your short story. It didn't drag on and on and it kept me interested the whole time. I really liked the idea of the ...

* This is a draft so any editing of any form is appreciated. This is written differently than a lot of my other short stories. It's an excerpt from a ...

* This is a first draft so any editing of any form is welcomed:)* Wooden carts rattled noisily along the hard packed dirt road, oblivious to the young man who ...

Heh. Heh. * I'm laughing dryly at my stupidness* Vampires were "created" way back in history when people got sick with leprosy. They couldn't go out into the light because ...

Foreword: Long ago, lost in the folds of history, the first Vampires were born. These people, feared by most who associated with them, were no different than you or I. ...

Hey Kyllorac, I was thinking about entering the contest and wanted to sum up the competition. No, I'm joking. I was trying to think of a way to write about ...

I think you did a pretty good job, just a few things though. The hand is a little... off. It looks bent around at a funny angel. You might want ...

Great picture! My sister's really into Motocross and all that though she's never gotten into it he he. I think my older brother did it for a while... anyways, looks ...

Your puppy/dog? is very adorable, thanks for sharing the photo with us. We use baby sweat-shirts to keep our new born goats warm, and diapers in the car, so seeing ...

Hey Wiki, I loved the picture. We have six horses on our ranch and their such beautiful animals to take pictures of. Thanks for posting and keep up the good ...

Great job Llama. I though the picture was great for a beginner... opposed to Juniper, I have a few comments. Since you were aiming for a bugs eyes view the ...

I think you did a great job on the artwork. I draw and pretty much suck and most of what I do... so when I see someone elses drawing I ...

Hello Roon. I love to draw Manga myself though I haven't been brave enough to try comic strips yet. I think what you did so far is awesome and that ...

Hey Shina, it's me:) I really liked your idea for a story, it sounds intriguing. I know it's kind of cliche' but maybe you could start your prologue out from ...

Well... I was making a list in my head as I read about what you should change but... everyone else already pointed them out:) So, I'll be your cheerleader! Go ...