DakotaK

Hi Dogs, I liked your story. It was funny and kept me reading. Just a few nitpicks: Freedom was so sweat I think you meant sweet see the devil her ...

Hi! I see someone's already gone over the nitpicks with you so I'll simply comment on my opinion. I liked it. It was crisp, clear, and to the point. It ...

Hey Kyllorac, Everyone else got the nit picks. I was just browsing through the "old" pages of YW and stumbled across your story. I wanted to let you know I ...

I see you haven't gotten a review yet. I get frustrated when no one reviews my writing. Anyways, I didn't read part 1 but I really enjoyed this. I felt ...

Um... I have a kind of dumb question... I have a novel I'm dying for someone to get the chance to read to see if it's any good. There's just ...

WELCOME!! Hi Maddyc! I'm new to YW as well but I just wanted to say hi from a fellow writer (I write Fantasy Fiction Novels mostly). I hope you like ...

Bravo! No, I'm not trying to bug you by posting on every single one of your posts:) I really liked your poem. The rhythm was good and it flowed nicely ...

Hi Qasim! Just wanted to take the time to say Hiya to a fellow writer! I joined two months ago and I've loved it! This site is awesome for authors ...

Ok, someone already got the nitpicks though I didn’t find any obvious ones while reading. I can tell you like writing about carnage. That was a pretty gruesome scene there ...

I read the first part of your story and I had to keep reading. There are only a few nit picks. I wouldn’t point them out at all except I’m ...

Here I go, your review from me. :lol: Anyways, if you don't like it: ignore it. :smt104 I've never watched Naruto so I don' t have anything to compare it ...

Ok, I kind of stink at reviews but I'll give it a shot. :oops: Skyler sat on her throne, preached (should be perched) on top of a very large elephant ...

I see you haven't had any reviews, and though I'm not really any good at doing them, I'll review your piece for you. I read it a while back so ...

Thanks for posting everyone:) Abigail, the "once upon a time" prefix is there because of the contest I entered it into; The Once Upon A Time Contest:) ~Dakota

Hey Zaddie, I like to draw and write. I think as a twelve year old you did a creat job, I mean we can't all start out with the Mona ...