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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dragonmaster Part 2: The Palace of Eternal Sleep

    Thank you for all of the reviews, I'm glad you were able to enjoy the chapter:) To clear up a little bit of misunderstanding on changing view point: There are ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dragonmaster Chapter 20: The Oath *Revised*

    I was awake before either Timmy or Victor and quickly slipped from the tent into the cold autumn air, Taz following sleepily behind me. The lingering mist seemed eerie as ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Do your characters talk to you?

    Yes... curious indeed. My sister has heard me talking in my sleep about my characters,lol.

    Aug 2, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Wolfbane Prologue

    Ikion’s muscles bunched beneath his sleek black pelt, anger fueling his frenzied journey through the dark forest. He could still see it, the blood seeping into the ground, the shredded ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dragonmaster Chapter 19: The Secret Hideway

    Birds called to one another outside while a soft breeze stirred the white curtains through the opened window. I rolled over and the bed squeaked as someone sat down at ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Cosmos (Outer Space) Part 3

    Hi ya Zanna, Thanks for letting me know you posted more, I really love your story. It's so vibrant and full of life and the characters, well I love them, ...

    Jul 18, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dragonmaster Chapter 7: Princess Sorena

    Thank you so much for the reviews, you helped me a lot Stella. I went back and brushed things up a bit:)

    Jul 17, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dragonmaster Chapter 4: A Warning

    Thanks for the reviews everyone! To Ranger: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Just to clear up a few things for you: Zavier has been oppressed by his father since he ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Town of Wolves (Chapt. 5)

    What happened to chapter 4? I couldn't find it and it wasn't on your novel page... “Errg, I ‘ve been asked to help with the slaughtering of a few sheep ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Town of Wolves (chapt. 3)

    Hi there, So I read your other chapters but they had quite in-depth reviews so I'll start here. Chapter one was my least favorite so far but chapter two was ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Soulless

    My emotion was numbness and my song was Wake Me Up Inside (see bottom of page for lyrics) I don’t remember much. Just the pain. I think I remember it ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dragonmaster Chapter 1: Dragon Stew*Revised*

    Thank you everyone for your helpful reviews, you probably don't realize how much it means that you take the time to read my work and help me improve it. I ...

    Jul 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Never Alone

    “You think she’ll be alright?” “She’ll never be the same, but her memories will fade eventually.” “Thank you, Dr. Stevens,” my aunt’s voice flitted through my mind like an annoying ...

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Tears of a Fairy

    Hi Zanna! So, here to review! First off, the prologue part really draws us in but it was a lot of show not tell so I couldn't feel it like ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Are you writing a novel?

    You bet I am! I actually have several started but only one that's going anywhere. It's called Dragonmaster and it's about a young man's journey to preserve Dragonkind and tame ...

    Jul 4, 2011


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