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Hey Wonderwolf, I really liked your artwork. It has a great style to it and I loved the coloration on it. I have to note this; I especially liked how ...

Hey Anna, I really enjoyed reading your fan fiction on Harry Potter. Unlike some people who simply re-write what the author has written you simply took the characters and opened ...

Hey Silversun, One nitpick super fast: and you hands It should be your hands. Anyways, your story sounded a lot like a very pretty, very sad poem. The story you ...

Hi Empress, Here as promised! I see that several other people already got the nit picks so I'll just let you know how I felt about the story itself. It ...

Hey Rose, I liked how you used a newspaper article as your prologue. Now is your story going to be about the pirates, or their victims? It was short, simple, ...

Hey Empress, There's always the "Will Review For Food" forum if you want to ask people to review your stuff. Just a warning though (from experience) don't post on like ...

Hi Faith, So is this your whole story or only an excerpt? It kinda looked as if it had gotten cut off at the end. Anyways, I'm doing these Creative ...

... ok, so I had like no idea what was going on in the least. Since this is excerpt: that's ok. I was just reading the words, images flashing through ...

I'm actually kinda new to the series and I'm on the 3rd book. Talk about action packed, there barley is room to breath before Alex is stuck in another life ...

Hi Kaykel, I'm not that familiar with the Match Girl story (It was a long time ago when I used to read those stories). But your story kinda lacked any ...

Welcome! YWS is definitely the place to be!!! I see Abigail went over some of the rules with you. In case your wondering what the colorful names are; here's a ...

Ok... call me stupid, but what does ARC stand for? Anyways, you spelling and grammar pretty much checked out. Yay, another part to the story ( I read your first ...

Thank you everyone! *Excited applause* Yeah reviews :lol: Note: Thanks Tayla for asking around as well *warm hug* I'm very grateful to everyone who took the time to answer my ...

Thanks for posting Silvercloud, I hadn't even read Bluestar's Prophecy before writing this. (I've already changed like 10 names in the story.) Anyways, it was Moonflower in Bluestar's Prophecy, not ...

Ok People, This piece has been entered in a contest that ends tomorrow (I think) and still it has a lonely review of 0. I know it's kind of long ...