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Re: Good Morning!
Hi Kylie, Welcome to YWS! If you were wondering what the colored names means, here's a clue: Black: Regular Member. You start out with a black name, it simply stands ...
Sep 4, 2009 -
Re: Psychics
Hey there, I don't know anything about psychics really but after reading your last paragraph I couldn't resist posting :smt005 I'm a triplet so I have two other sisters. One ...
Sep 4, 2009 -
Re: Paranoid Schizophrenia
Hey Krupp! Never heard of it. Sorry. No, I'm joking, I'm not going to post simply to say that! Ok, ever heard of Wikipedia? Awesomeness! Try this link, it's got ...
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: Short Story
Hey BigCityDreams, Here for a review! Ok, so I'll start off with the nitpicks: Once Mum had died, Just a suggestion, but the sentence might flow better if you take ...
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: 'Ello there, YWS!
Hey Lucinda! Welcome to Young Writers Society! Looks like you've come to the right place. Just a few guidelines you should know to help you out: ~The 2:1 ratio. Well, ...
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey Fern, It's nice to meet you *shakes hand* I'm Dakota. I hang around the Fantasy Fiction most but sometimes I slip away to check out other stuff. *eyes flash ...
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: photography (?) (new pictures)
Hey Player, Nice pics, I especially like the two end ones of the fire. I agree with Antigone about trying to make the pictures more eye catching. Probably you were ...
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: Miniature Art
Hey Jetpack, I'm really no expert on this though I have an idea what you're talking about. People do miniature art with loads of things. Ripley's Believe it Or Not ...
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: Stitches
Hey Rosey Unicorn, I might not be much of a help since I haven't seen it done on humans, but I work at a vet clinic where I see sutures ...
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: Silent Chaos
Hey Lilicia, So I'll just start out with a few nitpicks: What was that noise The sentence would flow more easily if you said "the" noise. Something that we can’t ...
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: I say 'pickle' you think 'pie'
Yeah, sound like fun! You said pickle: I said Stork (you know, those white birds who "deliver" babies?) What??!! It was the first thing that came to my mind! ~Dakota ...
Sep 2, 2009 -
Re: Royal Reviews by the Empress
Hey Empress, It's great your up and ready to do reviews so recently after joining. I just wanted to say hi and ask for a rain check :D I'll be ...
Sep 2, 2009 -
Re: Shipwreck
Hey Autumn Dragon, I was reading your prologue and there were just a few things I noticed: She finally read the door, and the latch was stuck. Was it supposed ...
Sep 2, 2009 -
Re: Hey
Hey Wolf-Dancer, welcome to Young Writers Society! Looks like you've come to the right place. Just a few guidelines you should know to help you out: ~The 2:1 ratio. Well, ...
Sep 2, 2009 -
Re: What do you think?
Hey there, I just wanted to let you know, you have a neat drawing. Like Roon mentioned, it was a bit hard to take it all in at once since ...
Sep 1, 2009
