DakotaK

Thanks:) I love suggestions! Improvment is one of the goals of posting here! ~DakotaK

Katherine screamed. Horror filled her as she stumbled to the floor, clutching at a large misshapen bundle. How? How could this be happening to her? Lightening shattered the night sky, ...

Hi Teardrop, I'm a little rusty with reviews but here goes one ok? So just for a few places that could be tidied up: Inside there was a large bed ...

Hey there, I really liked your little story. It was sweet and simple. I like Draco in the Harry Potter series, mostly I feel like he was a good guy ...

You live in Puerto Rico? That's awesome! I have a deep love for the nature all around me and there's no better way to share my love of the Redwood ...

Prologue The summer was dry and Da’Magathan was irritated greatly. He was young and horrifically troubled. Only three moon cycles before he had killed Shang’Gor, the great leader of the ...

I lay sleeping, a dream so terrible, haunting my heart and soul as I felt my mortal body trembling. Death is soon I fear . . . I am losing ...

Prologue: My Perfect Life (I’m crossing my finger’s behind my back in case you didn’t notice.) “He what?!” I squalled, spitting diet coke across the room. It splattered the filthy ...

Hey there Smorgishborg, I haven't done any reviews in awhile what with school and all so I'm a little rusty. But here goes. Nit Picks: crosses people minds. I think ...

*Author's Note:* I wrote this story called Dragon Master: Return of the Dragons like three or four years ago. It's part of a trilogy. The 1st and 2nd books are ...

Hi Pink! I read your first chapter as requested! I see that you already got the nitpicks pointed out so I won't get into that. I really enjoyed reading your ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! If you were wondering what the colored names means, here's a clue: Black: Regular Member. You start out with a black name, it simply stands for ...

Hi Pink! Looks like Aqua went over the rulers:) Anyways, welcome to young writers society! It's a pleasure to have you here. If you have any questions feel free to ...

Hi Onyx! It's great to see another new face on YWS. Looks like Aqua pretty much filled you in on whats what around here but if you have any questions ...

Ok, so on your neck (under the jaw) you have your some major arteries and jugular vein. If the jug gets cut badly and your not near a doctor you ...