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Hey I haven't used the new site very much but I was wondering if there was still a contest page? ~Dakota

“Mamma?” My voice trembled as I pressed my face to the wooden banister, peering between the slats at her. “Shh, Jimmy.” She hushed me quickly, pulling me to her chest, ...

Hi Tayla Chase, Well... you said you haven't written poetry before? Maybe you should write more, eh? I loved your piece! It was very poetic, and I didn't think the ...

Just suggested her teammates read your piece and I'm gad she did. I enjoyed the poetry very much, you wrote a splendid piece! I don't really have any nit-picks or ...

Hi Icy, So I wanted to say thank you for reviewing my work by reviewing one of your pieces in return. And wow, this was awesome! It had a very ...

Hi there! You reviewed a piece of mine a while back and I was just here to return the favor:) Okay, so the first stanza confused me a bit but ...

Hi ya! So thanks for reviewing my work, I'm now here to return the favor! I liked your piece, especially how even though it was set in the medieval times ...

Hi there! Returning the favor for reviewing my piece, thanks so much:) Wow, so I loved your writing, it was very emotional and deep. She began to cry, he could ...

Hi ya, It's Dakota here for a review! First off I will start with a few nit-picks. Tink tink tink. I pressed my fingers onto the keys of the piano, ...

“Princess Amaryllis?” I turned to glance back at Dezmond as he trailed behind me cautiously. It was Market Day and so the main thoroughfare through the city was at its ...

I was awoken abruptly as a scream pierced my aching head, and I flung myself upward, only to have several things happen at once. Shenna was still screaming in the ...

I was awake and on my feet in seconds, feeling more alive than I had in a long time. Glancing down I patted my chest to make sure I wasn’t ...

Hi ya! Sorry, I took a break from reviewing to drown in my own novel so now that I've come up for air I'm going to do some more reviews:) ...

It was amazing, being up here among the clouds on the back of a flying unicorn. The sun shone brightly overhead but the ground below was hidden by dense grey ...

“Yes, we’ll take one of those, please. Oh and what about those little lizard looking things?” Victor asked eagerly. We were in the small town store of The Pass Hamlet ...