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Re: The Mutation Chapter 1 The Before.
Hi there! Dakhar here for a review! Lets begin.Shall we? I'll begin with the positives first. So I liked the concept that you were going for. It had a very ...
Apr 18, 2020 -
Re: My Love
Hey @SMLocke I was impressed with your prequel "My Light" which led me to read this new piece. You did a great job taking care of grammatical mistakes in this ...
Apr 18, 2020 -
Re: My Light
Hey@SMLocke I have just read your interesting piece and I must say, It was well thought and written. However I did find some mistakes here and there which I am ...
Apr 18, 2020
