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Dakhar

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Mutation Chapter 1 The Before.

    Hi there! Dakhar here for a review! Lets begin.Shall we? I'll begin with the positives first. So I liked the concept that you were going for. It had a very ...

    Apr 18, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: My Love

    Hey @SMLocke I was impressed with your prequel "My Light" which led me to read this new piece. You did a great job taking care of grammatical mistakes in this ...

    Apr 18, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: My Light

    Hey@SMLocke I have just read your interesting piece and I must say, It was well thought and written. However I did find some mistakes here and there which I am ...

    Apr 18, 2020


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