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Re: Torn Paper
This made me laugh because it's exactly what i do on a daily basis when i'm trying to concentrate on something...now im wondering if i'm insane haha. But I thought ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: With You
Ashley not 'Ashely' is also a boys name......
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Sorry.
I think this is pretty amazing. I can empathize with what you have written whereas I sometimes think people write poetry just for the sake of it.
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: The Window
The Window The End The girl is standing at the top of the steeple, looking to the ground to search for the answers. She is trying to fight the thoughts ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: The Real
Wow. 'Haylie' thats pretty constructive criticism I'm so sorry that my writing bores you.
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: The Real
The Real The Imagination The woman sits in a chair in the centre of the room, her body distorted away from the figure beside her. Her arm rests in her ...
Apr 19, 2011
