Daisuki

I enjoyed this poem. I think it flowed pretty well, and I could understand it. I like the determination the person has about finishing the road, even if their heart ...

I have had writer's block lately with my short story, so I can really relate to this poem. Also, I really like the rhythm and the tap, tap, tap.

I loved this poem a lot! It was really deep - and I could relate. I love poems like these - about being yourself and not caring what others think. ...

Thank you very much everyone who reviewed! All your suggestions and comments were very helpful and I hope I improved the poem.

Aww... I love it. I got kinda scared when Alex went into a rage at the end, though. O.o

You're dialouge ability is amazing - it sounds natural and not awkward at all. I love the humor in here, it makes me smile and laugh. On to the next ...

Oh! I love your writing and this story and I can't wait for more! I like Alex's character and I hope he finds a down-to-earth lover, one who'll have fun ...

Yes, I agree. This was originally written as a story for school and we had to use certain vocabulary words. That paragraph was only added to include those words. Thanks ...