Dahlia

Hello, Dahlia here. Your title drew me in! From the height I am in I can see into your window. I watch you sleep restlessly by his side. I think ...

Hola, senorita, you've got one fancy title here! :wink: Rosalyn sat in class anxiously waiting for the bell to ring. It was her last class of the day; she was ...

Hello! I was looking for something to review and your title caught my eye. 8) [s]For[/s] The cold air holds no secrets , Jade. You should know that by now. ...

Inconsequential?

Joana Banana Fo Fana was shopping for muffins at the grocery store the other day. I waved hi and she waved back, but I noticed something strange, her butt cheeks ...

Hello! It's Dahlia, remember me from the chat? I saw her again. She spent her day at the same room. This time, she sat on the wooden floor, her back ...

Review posted! I actually reviewed your story before you posted. I hope I helped you!

Howdy! Dahlia here to review! That morning I was more nervous then I ever had been in my whole life. I hadn't seen my family in the longest time. They ...

Hey, Mars! I'm going to try to be as harsh/constructive as possible. :P "Ye of little faith," I reply, my voice steady. I am confident. I know I can take ...

Of course I will. I had just asked you if you wanted something to be reviewed. Haha. EDIT: Review posted!

Hola, I'm gonna review your piece! 8) The Purple Paperclip There once was a purple paperclip Despite it’s location, it was quite pleased To the other utensils The Paper and ...

Howdy! I'm Dahlia and I'm here to review your piece. :P "Adam. Adam, get up." I grumbled something and turned over. "Adam, today's our birthday. Don't you remember?" My twin ...

The Nature of Jade is a YABA book at my school so if I read it I get extra credit on an English test. I think I might check it ...

Hey, there, I'm going to do my first non-fiction review! I'm going to remain as neutral as possible and not critique you on your political views. might be easy to ...

They're quirks and motivations and what propels them forward. They're stories really. I love all my characters, I can't say a specific character trait. I find them all interesting in ...