Daenyss

Everything you say is completely fair, and I'd encourage you to read my response to Sacredlege below - I think it addresses many of the things I'd say here. I'll ...

Hey, thanks for coming by! As I've said before(I have no clue if it was in response to you or not) this is an early work - written 6 months ...

I see where you're coming from with all of this, and I just want to say- this is not my best work. At all. It's old, and I honestly kind ...

Oh, my friend, this is far from the end! In fact, this is just the beginning! I see where you're coming from with most of your critiques, and I'd like ...

I definitely see where you're coming from in this one! I know about the whole Grammys thing, but it's fiction - I decided to play with reality just a bit. ...

Thanks for reviewing! I think your critiques about Lauren and her, admittedly, weird relationship with Cullen are completely warranted! As happens so often, I have years of backstory in my ...

Thanks so much for stopping by! I loved the crying scene myself, it was so much fun. And as for your critiques, I based how Lauren wrote songs on how ...

awww thanks! i'm in love with this story too, and it actually needs an editor! if you'd be willing to help me out with that, message me and let me ...

Thanks for reviewing! I definitely see where you're coming from with this, and I think the majority of my problems would be solved by having a good editor - something ...

Thanks for the review! The whole thing with this seeming like it was written by someone inexperienced is because it is - I've come a long way since I wrote ...

Thanks for reviewing! If you wouldn't mind messaging me about how my structure could be a little better, I'd love to hear what you have to say so I can ...

The sentence about Liam's confict of being her brother vs. a judge was originally meant to convey the confict of does he protect her, or does he expose her to ...