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The Setting of our tale is(feudal?) Japan, Where 5 families fight for the keepsake of the land. Each family owns a group of ninja's who are given tasks ranging from ...

*Weird, this sounds exactly like a story I had thought of two years ago on Quizilla...well count me in!* Name: Horsestrings Glenn(still trying to get the last name changed) Age: ...

I honestly think this is a pretty good beginning for the first two chapters of a book...BUT! Your first paragraph focuses on many irrevelant details; you should focus on the ...

Jeffery suddenly found the foot to be controlled by a man in a nice red uniform, The man stood up and shouted...

Name:Arthur Brigs Age: 15 Gender:Male Personality: Is paranoid of others; wishes to have a lover in life;undecided Sexual life Appearance: Tall, Light brown hair with pink highlights History: I prefer