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I like this chapter, it’s short and to the point and full of suspense. And it answers my question on what happened to poor Skittles. I wouldn’t advise to change ...

Chapter 3 Lost & Found Normally the alarm doesn’t bother me. The high pitched beeping noise often drowns in my dreams and to be honest, I’m usually up before it ...

Welcome to YWS!! So, you like horror too, eh? Have you heard of...Slender Man? :shock: Or maybe Candlejack, but then again who hasn't heard of Cand-- Anyway, what's your favorite ...

My favorite genre is 'Horror' by far! I am passionate about the subject, enjoying movies, books, paranormal investigation stories and plays. Darren Shan has been my ultimate inspiration for some ...

i like this! im enjoying reading each chapter, but im also sort of confused about why the cat is buried in the back yard. I'm thinking the girl killed it, ...

Chapter 2 Burial Re-Dug That stupid cat was already past age expectancy, and that little girl, oh I'm sure she was faking it. Not once did I ever see her ...

First of all, Your originality strikes me! I cannot express enough of how much I enjoyed this. I suppose I've become so accustomed to reading horror, that I've really missed ...

Astonishing. This piece was intriguing, yet real. Like something, I've never read before. You've taken a creative story line which others can relate to. Personally I believe the most effective ...

Heyy ^_^ My name is Alexis. I am 17 years old, currently going into grade 12 this coming year. I have looked for quite some period, attempting to find a ...

this was confusing, but good. What does the teacher mean when she says this is not the mc first time in her class? Other than that i like it! continue! ...

First off, I would like to thank you for your time and effort on this review. It is greatly appreciated. One of your questions, "Why is she laughing about the ...

Hello, my name is Alexis. Over the past couple of years I have become quite passionate about writing and have made an effort in developing my own style. I have ...

Excellent! An intense opening is a great way to start. Your character development is intriguing and I was hooked from sentence one. I can see a few grammatical mistakes but ...