Cyvain87

I absolutely loved reading this. I found it very immersive indeed as I read and the ending was a very unique and interesting twist. I honestly cannot think of any ...

This is a very interesting piece of writing however I do have a few criticisms about it which I hope you won't take as me being picky. The first is ...

The way Mafia is trapping Boliver for the murder here is absolutely brilliant, flawless even. It seems like he could never be touched. There are a few sections where things ...

Loving the way this story is going however a few comments I firsthave on this chapter. First of all the way the stranger is immediately accusing Boliver of the murder ...

Well this chapter felt a little different to the last one. To be quite honest it felt like this one was a little rushed with the speed of the scene. ...

I love the suspense at the end of this chapter and all the many questions of what is going to happen to Adam. It makes you want to carry on ...

Wow what a very different and interesting twist this story has! I also love how you describe the battle between the dragon and the Knight, it flows so beautifully. The ...

This feels like a great introduction to this novel. I especially love the way you describe the characters and show their emotions and unique characteristics. I personally have no critique ...

First of all apologies for the empty comment! My twitchy fingers got the better of me just then. Now to my review! I absolutely love the way Catalonia and Alfonso ...

Greetings once more coming back for more input since Chapter 1. I am absolutely loving the character of Ethan and how scary/sexy he is being portrayed. Looking forward to see ...

Very intriguing indeed, I very much look forward to reading more of this. The first person perspective adds to the suspense of this beautifully and the portrayal of emotions is ...

This is a very creative poem you have written and I like it very much. I do not wish to repeat words that have already been said but I completely ...

Amazing! This was riveting and heart stopping at the same time. The way you have phrased the entire piece grips the attention of the reader. The addition of the singing ...

I can feel the desperation in the words of feeling sorry for everything, it is a very powerful emotion behind those words. I am not the best at grammar but ...