Cynara

Hey! Cynara here ready to give my little opinion. Ok, lets start. First of all, I think youre going a little bit too fast (my opinion). In the first chapter ...

Hi! Cynara here ready to put your head on a chopper :twisted: . Just kidding :lol: . I really liked this a lot. Like for real. My deary of a ...

Hi! :) Cynara here. First of let me tell you I loved your story :D . You got me out of my boredom. Seriously it was killing me :( . ...

Chapter 4: The Test! I was staring at my ceiling. I couldn’t sleep anymore. I was afraid I was going to have another nightmare. Ever since Emma said that I ...

Blue! Loved it! Really I did. I'll look forward for the next one. You better post it soon... or else :twisted:. You know what that means! As for a review... ...

Okay a few things I noticed when I was reding: He only went inside the café because it was the first place he’d spotted where he could smoke inside. It ...

Chapter 3: Calendar I would have never thought that this was going to happen to me. I mean sure, I did get a hangover after the party at the twins ...

Grammar: [quote ]"Killed." I growled out loud. That's what they were going to do to me the Carverians family. All because I wasn't ready to settle down with their oldest ...

Hi. Socks here! That was hands down hi-la-rious. My friend and I were almost tearing up. Im not a fan girl, but I do love twilight. Anyways I thought it ...

Hey Dark Eyed Pixie! Something that caught my eye was that you missed a lot of periods (something that I do a lot too.). Example: “Ok, 45 minutes to kill” ...

You have a lot of mistakes here. For example: [/quote]My name is coriander phillips i was born in england in 1975 with the horror and misery that lies within me ...

Chapter 2: Missing page My head hurts and every other single inch of my body; my legs even seem to feel like they’ve been knocked off. To top it all ...

I think you should continue writing this story. I enjoyed it very much and loved how the characters get along. I also liked your descriptions. Please keep writing! I'll look ...

I completely loved it. The ending was my favorite though. It had a few grammatical errors, but one could still understand. I look forward to read more from you.

Thanks to all of you for posting your messages and helping me. I know I made a lot of mistakes, thanks for all the opinions and suggestions... I'll be thinking ...