Cynara

Hi there! :) Well, lets get started! These are things that I picked up while I was reading: She also happened to be extraordinarily bright. She astounded her tutors everyday ...

Hey there! I'm Cynara and welcome to YWS! :) Lets start with your review... OK first of all I'm going to say that I think that you should have not ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS I'm Cynara and I'll be doing a quick review... OK. Lets start! “Muraco!” S he cried. She was Lomahongva, and she was the most beautiful ...

Oh my God! :shock: What happened to Jacob? You're good, evil good :twisted:. Making me wanting to read more... That is mean you better post more, 'cause I so totally ...

Hey there! Ha I get to review you first! :) I'm going to be so mean you wont know what hit ya!!! :twisted: Just kidding!! :mrgreen: OK first I'm going ...

Here there! :D First thing I have to say is: I LOVE this story :smt007 . I read all your chapters! :smt026 It keeps me wanting more :smt024 I look ...

Chapter 6: A lie to be told and a secret to keep It was now officially 1:30 a.m. and my parents were still interrogating me. This was the longest conversation ...

Yay!! :smt026 This is what I wanted to see from you... motivation that is :smt023 I love it!!! :smt007 and what can I say, but keep it up! :mrgreen: I ...

This was great!!! :smt038 As I told you not very long ago, I feel very addicted to this story. :smt024 So, don't be mean :smt079 :smt064 and post more! ...........Or ...

Oh, deary you've been holding out on us. :shock: This is really pretty! :) Love it :) And you know I'm so right... about what I told you. :wink:

Hey there! :) You have a good story here and I hope you continue it. OK, time for my critique. :) Tatum broke off from the kiss and put his ...

Hey there! :) Ok first of all let me say this is awsome! :D Read all the chapters and Loved them. Ok one of the things that I've noticed is ...

Chapter 5: Decision You know that feeling that sometimes you have when you receive bad news. The one where you’re pissed at the whole world and don’t want to talk ...

Hey! :) Cynara here! Let's get started. The first thing I'm going to say is that it was too short. :x I'm not saying I like testaments or anything, but ...

Hi! :) Cynara here! Ok now lets go to your review :wink:. First of all you had a lot of periods placed where there should be commas. One little example ...