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Re: all of us are angels
I like this! It's very cute and gives people encouragement to reach for dreams :) It's wonderful :) KEEP GOIN!
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Perfection
Very nice short rhyming poetry.. Love it and keep it up please thanks
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: new
I liked the message in the first poem it was absolutely powerful and beautiful. I preferred the rhyming and flow of the second one. For some reason I really prefer ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: The Butterfly and The Breeze
It IS a very nice, sweet little petite poem. Short, nicely formatted and straight to the point. I prefer these types of poems rather than those long long LONG sentenced ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: The old and beautiful
She could only felt a sword in a stone - She could only FEEL* a sword in a stone She kept cutting herself in pity like nothing else is worse ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: you need to be free
I like this, this is nicely written. I am also re-attempting poetry soon :D so I'm looking around for inspiration and This was very inspirational. GREAT JOB.
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Silent Wings
very very nicely creative :) two things - u spelled Coming and Break wrongly. other than that - KEEP IT UP~! !
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Pascal (Chapter 2)
Pascal CHAPTER 2 ‘How you feeling, hun?’ Pascal could hear his mother’s voice, and a subtle, yet rhythmic “bleep – bleep” noise coming from his right side. He slowly opened ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Pascal (Chapter 1)
Pascal CHAPTER 1 ‘Turn to page one hundred and two, please.’ Mr. Bunslark echoed right to the back of the class. Within minutes everyone was slamming their heavy English textbooks ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: The Young Writers Club?
Ahhhh yes. TYWC. The Young Writers Club. I used to hang out there. Unfortunately I never got to submit anything because it always used to say that there wasn't enough ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: I'll Ruin Her
Wow that was a really good piece of writing. It showed a short glimpse of how the character felt about .. her MOTHER :O dun dun duuuun :o !!!!! haha ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: 'Ello!
hihi! im new too! nice to be here :) its a great site so far
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: heyzz :) I'm a newbie here! helloo!! :D
Hiya everyone :) My name is Elle and I'm new on this site! I used to be around TYWC until it closed.. Now i've found this website! It's great so ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
I remember TYWC a long time ago! It was soooo full it hadn't been checked since 2004! I'm happy now that I've found this site. Welcome back, me! :D :D ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
I remember TYWC a long time ago! It was soooo full it hadn't been checked since 2004! I'm happy now that I've found this site. Welcome back, me! :D :D ...
Oct 20, 2008
